Elevator Pitch No. 4

1. The Pitch: 

     

     2.  Reflection on feedback: The feedback from my "Elevator Pitch No. 3" was mainly very positive and helpful with nothing that was outright wrong or silly. Comments consisted of saying that I was very professional, and had confidence and personality. These were very complimentary comments, and it gave me confidence in my pitch. They all thought the content of my pitch was very clear and significant, and they still liked how I kept it short and sweet. I think that's a key part in a pitch because most people want to know the most significant pieces in as short as a time period as possible. The only negative comment was that I should try to "spice it up" and try to act more excited with my business. 

     3.  Changes based on feedback: Between my 2nd and 3rd Elevator Pitch, I made many changes for the better and this was reflected from the positive comments on my "Elevator Pitch No. 3". Based on my feedback on the 3rd pitch, I did not change the material, as everyone seemed to believe that I hit all the criteria. The only thing I changed was trying to sound more dynamic which I did by sounding more enthused and energetic about my idea. I think this was a necessary change because the only way for people to get excited about your business is to actually sound energetic about your business.